Keep the original entry visible
The review screen should show the original narrative, recorded duration, matter identifier, author, date, and proposed issue. A suggested rewrite belongs beside the original, not in its place.
I would prevent the language component from changing recorded time or rates. If a billing owner needs to correct those fields, that should be a separate authorized action with its own reason and history. Combining narrative cleanup and financial edits makes review harder.
The output should also distinguish a formatting suggestion from a factual question. Expanding an approved abbreviation is different from asking what document was reviewed. The second requires information from the timekeeper or another authorized source, not a more assertive prompt.